Lauren,
The work you are producing is really beginning to take shape and I have added a couple of comments to some blog posts for improvements you could make. Some other things to consider:
All your mood boards need a brief analysis to accompany them - essentially how they relate to and reflect the target audience for your magazine. You have completed all your mood boards apart from the colour one, but I would be surprised if you have completed it but not uploaded it to your blog.
Remember with all the written posts that you do, the visual aspect is just as important to the content. Use images where you can and try to make sure you cover everything as described on the EN AS media blog. This applies specifically to the magazine industry post. Try to avoid posts which are just text.
After going through your blog, you seem to be missing a few posts - although it may well be that you have completed them but not uploaded them. Missing is:
1 Feature article analysis (I'm sure you did an analysis on the Nicki Minaj DPS)
Magazine industry post
Main task questionnaire and analysis
Rough sketches (pencil) for your main task
Colour mood board (mentioned earlier)
There isn't any of the preliminary task on your blog either but I am sure this is just an oversight.
Please do speak to me if you want to clarify anything - try to address this ASAP as I want to have a second look through over the Xmas holidays. Completing any outstanding research and planning work is your task for the Xmas holidays and try to make sure you get drafts of all 3 products uploaded to your blog before you finish for Xmas.
Carl.
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